{snicker} I think it's physically impossible for me to write a sex scene without humor. It just... I just can't. ;p I'm glad having those bits in there actually work for you in the story. :)
With that switch of dynamics, I definitely couldn't have done this from Lex or Superman's pov. Well, I could have, but not with the same impact. Lois was perfect for an outside view of all the tells (from both guys). She's watching... but she doesn't actually *know*. We do, though. ;D You picked up on every one of the things I was going for! Lex wasn't struggling... surprised, yes; struggling, no. Oh, most definitely not struggling. ^^ And wanting Clark shoving in so tight into his mouth, just as Lex had been taunting him in the warehouse. And Clark was so pissed...
Heh, Lex doesn't know *anything* at this point. His whole world just went upside down. You described it very well. :)
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Date: 2011-05-18 03:54 pm (UTC)With that switch of dynamics, I definitely couldn't have done this from Lex or Superman's pov. Well, I could have, but not with the same impact. Lois was perfect for an outside view of all the tells (from both guys). She's watching... but she doesn't actually *know*. We do, though. ;D You picked up on every one of the things I was going for! Lex wasn't struggling... surprised, yes; struggling, no. Oh, most definitely not struggling. ^^ And wanting Clark shoving in so tight into his mouth, just as Lex had been taunting him in the warehouse. And Clark was so pissed...
Heh, Lex doesn't know *anything* at this point. His whole world just went upside down. You described it very well. :)