Date: 2010-06-13 08:19 pm (UTC)
I didn't mention it in my notes before, but the "Zippers came down" line cracks me up but good.

I like the change at the beginning. It makes the scene more concrete from the get-go.

The handjob still... guh. And the bathroom... Clark coming and Lex rather smug and evil and... it's just incredibly hot.

Hot boys everywhere, indeed. I can't wait for Clark to find a more private place.
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